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How Do You Write Poetry? by: Anthony Keith Whitehead The very short answer is: don't write at all unless you have to. The short answer is: in numerous different ways. A somewhat longer answer is: find the way that best suits you - that comes only from experience. But, one might reasonably ask, what different methods are there which can be tried in order to get started? Well... Don't Wait For Inspiration But don't take that as an absolute which suggests that one should not be inspired at all. Of course, we all want inspiration. Yet if we wait to be inspired for the whole poem, most of us will have taken the very short answer given above and we shall write very little and very infrequently. You probably know the old adage about any form of art being ten percent inspiration and ninety percent perspiration. It's mostly like that with poetry. The very short answer above is saying: write only when you feel moved to write and have something urgent to communicate. But don't expect the inspiration to carry you through the whole poem. On some occasions it will but, at least in my experience, that will not happen all that often. Inspiration can come in various ways. At one end it can come as a complete poem; at the other, it comes simply as an idea, a concept or a way of looking at something. Then the poem has to be built around that in some way. How To Build A Poem This is getting to the nitty gritty of the question. The answer to How do I build or write a poem depends to some extent on what you are starting with. Suppose you have just had an idea, a concept, a way of looking at something. One might, for example, have a sudden flash of inspiration that a person's life could be summarised by the array of cups they have in the kitchen. Okay, how might one approach the development of that? First is to have some idea of the probable length of the poem. The cups/life idea might be interesting but it's not going to stretch to the length of 'The Rhyme of the Ancient Mariner' It's going to be quite a short poem. In fact, with an idea of this kind short becomes very important. Trying to stretch it out will probably result in loosing any potential for impact. So one is thinking of a few lines, and probably quite short ones. Next is the syllabic or the rhythmic structure of the lines. A great deal can be said about these aspects and so we can say very little in this short article. The way the lines are constructed should be contributing to the overall impact or impression made by the poem. Lines may have the same number of syllables, or some lines may be long and other short. Verses, like lines may be all of the same or of differing lengths. These aspects may be part of a deliberate overall scheme, or they may be due to the way you feel the poem should evolve. Experience will usually contribute to the development of these kinds of instincts. The poem may also be one without thyme, or with rhyme at the end of each line, or with rhyming lines alternating or rhyming every third line and so forth. Alternatively, the lines may have internal rhyming in that two words rhyme within the same line. Consider the following poem as an example. CUPS Used to buy the cups in tied sets batched identical or matching. But that's a now flawed memory and for a long time we rhymed them into pairs, merging his and hers, protocol of shape and colour. Now I buy only one-by-one, each detached and unmatchable, self-chosen oddments on a shelf Note that: there are eight syllables in each of nine lines. There are no end rhymes but each line has an internal rhyme, though some are less obvious than others. In the first line 'buy' and 'tie' in tied' rhyme. Due to the 'd' in tied' the echo of the rhyme is subdued or more subtle than otherwise. (Note also that there are different kinds of syllables, which we do not have space to discuss here) Compare this poem with an alternative approach, albeit little different in length: THE MUG-STAND On the mug-stand (a) handles once hung (b) cups of pristine sameness (c) beautiful and aimless (c) in the song they sung (b) at secondhand. (a) Mugs are still hung (d) but different (e) shapes and colours, chipped, cracked - (f) and spaces from the fact (f) of life. Refluent (e) the song now sung. (d) Now 'The Mug Stand' has a much more complicated structure. There is no internal rhyming but the end-rhymes are arranged to give sometimes stronger, sometimes more subtle echoes. The letters at the end of the lines (a, b, etc.) indicate those which rhyme with each other. The pattern is the same in each verse so that, for example, the first and last lines in both are seen to rhyme. Notice also that the syllabic length of lines vary within each verse but have the same pattern for each verse (i.e. '4
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